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This man had the most mesmerizing eyes you had ever seen. They were like fiery rubies, burning through your soul. He spoke in a soft tone, despite the harsh German accent. "Are you alright?" You looked up into his eyes, still captivated by them. He smiled softly and picked up your tiny body. "Zehre's von right here!" he shouted.
A group of soldiers crowded around you. You clung to the man's slender, milky white neck. "She doesn't look any older zahn ten," one of the soldiers reported after inspecting you a bit.
"Gut. Zehn I shall take her to zee camp," the man stated. "She can't shtay here like zihs." You watched as the soldiers stood firm and held their arms out in unison before turning and leaving to investigate the crumbling, war-abused city. "Vaht is your name, Kind?" he asked as he carried you back to camp.
"__-__________," you answered.
"Zaht is a Gut name, __________," he smiled. "You can call me Gilbert. Gilbert Beilschmidt."
You smiled up at him. There was something almost too amazing about this man. "Are you a knight?" you chirped, remembering the stories of how handsome the knights-in-shing-armor were.
He looked down at you in surprise. "You zihnk I'm a knight?" You nodded; he blushed. "I used to be..."
You gasped; a real-live knight like in those storybooks! "Then... can I call you Sir Gilbert?" you squeaked. His blush deepened and he nodded. "Sir Gilbert... The Awesome!" you giggled.
*~*
There was a small knock on your door. You looked up. "Come in," you called. A tall man with blonde hair and cool winter for eyes stepped in. You smiled. "Hallo, Ludwig."
Ludwig forced a smile. "Hallo, __________."
You frowned. You had been living with Gilbert and Ludwig for almost ten years. Ludwig never smiled. "What's wrong?" you asked, easily seeing through his facade.
Ludwig bowed his head. "It's Gilbert."
You jumped. "I-is he alright?"
Ludwig nodded. "He..." he cleared his throat. "He's going on a long trip. I don't know vehn he vill be back."
You breathed a sigh of relief. "Don't scare me! I thought something bad happened to him! Well, when's he leaving? I want to say goodbye to him!"
Ludwig shook his head. "He's... already gone."
You twitched. "W-without saying goodbye?" Tears fell from your (eye color) eyes. "N-not awesome, Gilbert..."
Ludwig walked over to you. "He told me to give zihs to you." You looked up in time to see Ludwig handing you an envelope. On it was your name, printed in Gilbert's elegant calligraphy. "Read it," he ordered, though it sounded more like he was pleading.
You opened it and began to read, "To the most awesome girl I've ever met. I'm sorry I had to go on such short notice. Duty calls, you know! I, the Awesome, am needed everywhere! ... Just kidding. I wish I could have stayed with you a little longer. I had so many dreams about us together... Take care of West for me. I don't know when I'll be back so you'll be my awesome replacement! I'll see you soon. Love, Sir Gilbert."
You caught yourself smiling like an idiot. "Hey, Ludwig?" You looked up at him. "If I write a reply, would you send it for me?"
Ludwig choked back tears. He knew you would ask that. "Sure, _________."
You giggled as you wrote the reply, retelling the memories of the tea parties 'Princess ___________' and 'Sir Gilbert' had together. You wrote to him that you wanted to see him again as quickly as possible. You signed and dated the letter and shoved it in Ludwig's arms, anticipation overflowing from you. "Thank you Ludwig. I hope he writes me back soon!"
Ludwig gave you a genuine smile. "I'm sure he vill, __________."
*~*
"I'm going on a trip, West."
Ludwig looked up from his manual. "Vaht?"
"You heard me. Zee Awesome Prussia is going avay!" he snapped.
"But..." Ludwig started, still in disbelief. "Vaht about __________? You love her."
Gilbert stayed quiet. "Ja. I love her. But so do you." Ludwig turned red. "Zaht's vhy I vant you to do me a favor."
Ludwig looked away, knowing it would be something completely unethical. "Vaht is it?"
Gilbert looked over his shoulder and smirked. But the obvious sadness would not leave his face. "Write to her for me."
Ludwig sighed. "Stupid Bruder." He looked at your letter, reading it carefully. He moved to his typewriter, saying aloud what he wrote. "Zee Awesome Prussia has responded!"
A group of soldiers crowded around you. You clung to the man's slender, milky white neck. "She doesn't look any older zahn ten," one of the soldiers reported after inspecting you a bit.
"Gut. Zehn I shall take her to zee camp," the man stated. "She can't shtay here like zihs." You watched as the soldiers stood firm and held their arms out in unison before turning and leaving to investigate the crumbling, war-abused city. "Vaht is your name, Kind?" he asked as he carried you back to camp.
"__-__________," you answered.
"Zaht is a Gut name, __________," he smiled. "You can call me Gilbert. Gilbert Beilschmidt."
You smiled up at him. There was something almost too amazing about this man. "Are you a knight?" you chirped, remembering the stories of how handsome the knights-in-shing-armor were.
He looked down at you in surprise. "You zihnk I'm a knight?" You nodded; he blushed. "I used to be..."
You gasped; a real-live knight like in those storybooks! "Then... can I call you Sir Gilbert?" you squeaked. His blush deepened and he nodded. "Sir Gilbert... The Awesome!" you giggled.
*~*
There was a small knock on your door. You looked up. "Come in," you called. A tall man with blonde hair and cool winter for eyes stepped in. You smiled. "Hallo, Ludwig."
Ludwig forced a smile. "Hallo, __________."
You frowned. You had been living with Gilbert and Ludwig for almost ten years. Ludwig never smiled. "What's wrong?" you asked, easily seeing through his facade.
Ludwig bowed his head. "It's Gilbert."
You jumped. "I-is he alright?"
Ludwig nodded. "He..." he cleared his throat. "He's going on a long trip. I don't know vehn he vill be back."
You breathed a sigh of relief. "Don't scare me! I thought something bad happened to him! Well, when's he leaving? I want to say goodbye to him!"
Ludwig shook his head. "He's... already gone."
You twitched. "W-without saying goodbye?" Tears fell from your (eye color) eyes. "N-not awesome, Gilbert..."
Ludwig walked over to you. "He told me to give zihs to you." You looked up in time to see Ludwig handing you an envelope. On it was your name, printed in Gilbert's elegant calligraphy. "Read it," he ordered, though it sounded more like he was pleading.
You opened it and began to read, "To the most awesome girl I've ever met. I'm sorry I had to go on such short notice. Duty calls, you know! I, the Awesome, am needed everywhere! ... Just kidding. I wish I could have stayed with you a little longer. I had so many dreams about us together... Take care of West for me. I don't know when I'll be back so you'll be my awesome replacement! I'll see you soon. Love, Sir Gilbert."
You caught yourself smiling like an idiot. "Hey, Ludwig?" You looked up at him. "If I write a reply, would you send it for me?"
Ludwig choked back tears. He knew you would ask that. "Sure, _________."
You giggled as you wrote the reply, retelling the memories of the tea parties 'Princess ___________' and 'Sir Gilbert' had together. You wrote to him that you wanted to see him again as quickly as possible. You signed and dated the letter and shoved it in Ludwig's arms, anticipation overflowing from you. "Thank you Ludwig. I hope he writes me back soon!"
Ludwig gave you a genuine smile. "I'm sure he vill, __________."
*~*
"I'm going on a trip, West."
Ludwig looked up from his manual. "Vaht?"
"You heard me. Zee Awesome Prussia is going avay!" he snapped.
"But..." Ludwig started, still in disbelief. "Vaht about __________? You love her."
Gilbert stayed quiet. "Ja. I love her. But so do you." Ludwig turned red. "Zaht's vhy I vant you to do me a favor."
Ludwig looked away, knowing it would be something completely unethical. "Vaht is it?"
Gilbert looked over his shoulder and smirked. But the obvious sadness would not leave his face. "Write to her for me."
Ludwig sighed. "Stupid Bruder." He looked at your letter, reading it carefully. He moved to his typewriter, saying aloud what he wrote. "Zee Awesome Prussia has responded!"
Literature
The Last Three Days (Germany and Prussia) Day 1
NOT YAOI
"Hast gekämpft und jeden Moment mit mir geteilt. Ich bin stolz auch jetzt bei dir zu sein." -Unheilig
February 23, 1947
“You do realize what this means for Germany… don’t you, Prussia?” Churchill murmurs dangerously. “He will be the enemy that everyone wants to see’s head on a silver platter. He will spend the rest of his years as a nation in misery, torment, and blame. He will be hated. Despised. The Nazi Country that children have nightmares about."
Prussia bows
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The Last Three Days (Germany and Prussia) Prologue
NOT YAOI!
The Last Three Days
"Ich schau zurück auf eine wunderschöne Zeit; warst die Zuflucht und die Wiege meines Seins."
February 22, 1947
It’s dark when Prussia gets home.
The sun has long since vanished and the gold, pink, and orange hues that had once set the sky on fire before Prussia entered the meeting have melded into an inky blue. There are no stars out tonight; it’s boggy and overcast, and the air is cold in a way that Prussia has never experienced it before. Inside is just as desolate – the lights are all off, the window shades drawn, and the radio silent. He wonders if Germany turned down the hea
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Dying for me (Germany x Prussia)Not Yaoi!!!
Slowly his body weakens and nothing I say or do can stop the death that was soon to consume his once powerful body. I try hard not to let tears slip through my eyes they can’t do anything to stop the process of his country that was going to be gone in a matter of days hopefully months or years, but they fall anyways at least not in front of him.
“West,” His voice was soft barely audible and he couldn’t even turn his head to face me as he spoke but on his pale face laid a smile, “Don’t *cough* worry about me…..” He stopped for a second and tried harder to turn his head towards me.
Instead I st
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link to picture~ [link] (it's in there somewhere )
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EDIT:
Thank you so much to for fixing my terrible German grammar mistake!
OTHER EDIT:
I don't have a premium membership, as told by the ~ in front of my name, but I would really appreciate a critique? I want to know what I can improve on
OTHER, OTHER EDIT
Poll! [link]
I could take this either or both ways, but I want to know what you think!
Who should Reader-Sama end up with?? The Awesome Prussia? The sweet-and-sensitive-on-the-inside Germany? Both? NEITHER/CAN'T CHOOSE?? Whatever gets the most votes wins!
Please don't say surprise me. You might not like what you read
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this was incredibly hard! I tried hard not to make them fight over you guys, so this is the crud that came out! I hope you guys enjoy it!
This was inspired by WWII and the dissolution of Prussia. You guys can take Prussia's "trip" however you want; I know I do... Also, I had a dream once where Prussia was a knight in shining armor. It was extremely cute~
BTW, I was listening to my Philip Wesley radio on Pandora when I wrote this, so that might explain the sadness behind it
yes! there will be more!
hell no, i'm tired...
b-but... author-chan... oh hell, I, the good side of author-chan, will write it! and IT WILL BE FLUFFY!
I will NOT allow you to ruin my reputation, woman.
Here's the next part~ [link]
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Story (c)
Hetalia (c)
You (c) and
link to picture~ [link] (it's in there somewhere )
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
EDIT:
Thank you so much to for fixing my terrible German grammar mistake!
OTHER EDIT:
I don't have a premium membership, as told by the ~ in front of my name, but I would really appreciate a critique? I want to know what I can improve on
OTHER, OTHER EDIT
Poll! [link]
I could take this either or both ways, but I want to know what you think!
Who should Reader-Sama end up with?? The Awesome Prussia? The sweet-and-sensitive-on-the-inside Germany? Both? NEITHER/CAN'T CHOOSE?? Whatever gets the most votes wins!
Please don't say surprise me. You might not like what you read
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
this was incredibly hard! I tried hard not to make them fight over you guys, so this is the crud that came out! I hope you guys enjoy it!
This was inspired by WWII and the dissolution of Prussia. You guys can take Prussia's "trip" however you want; I know I do... Also, I had a dream once where Prussia was a knight in shining armor. It was extremely cute~
BTW, I was listening to my Philip Wesley radio on Pandora when I wrote this, so that might explain the sadness behind it
yes! there will be more!
hell no, i'm tired...
b-but... author-chan... oh hell, I, the good side of author-chan, will write it! and IT WILL BE FLUFFY!
I will NOT allow you to ruin my reputation, woman.
Here's the next part~ [link]
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Story (c)
Hetalia (c)
You (c) and
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To be completely honest, I believe you conceived everyone's POV/reactions perfectly for the plot. Though I can only gauge both Prussia and Germany's personaties based on either the anime or otherfanfictions, all of it seemed very believable. Also, I cannot help but get this emotional feel from the story. I mean really, a few heart-strings were tugged when I reached the end, knowing the possibility that Prussia may not come back, or just the fact that he cared enough about me to have Germany write replis. The overall originality of the fanfic is alittle iffy however (In fact, I wrote a story similar to tis not 2 weeks ago). Although the letter concept is definitely new to me. All together, the story made me feel very...fuzzy inside. It's one of those stories you wouldn't mind having a sequel/ series to go along with... *hint hint*. (I only have one question though...They found me when I was 10, and I've been living with them 10 additional years. Does that mean I'm still calling Prussia 'Sir Gilbert' at age 20? Now that's love!) In general, this was an epic story and I would easily recommend it to someone else. Thank you for bringing this masterpiece into such an undeserving world.